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Susumu Takiguchi : Go Shichi Go

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©　Daily Yomiuri, August 9, 2007


A parting of the ways in poetry

Susumu Takiguchi
Special to The Daily Yomiuri

This column, Go-Shichi-Go, has been running for more than five years and today's is the 62nd installment. Esha-jori is a Buddhist precept meaning that all those who meet in this life must also inevitably part. An English idiom goes, "All...things must come to an end" (readers can fill in the dotted line for themselves).

Likewise, the time has come for Go-Shichi-Go to end its life and with mixed feelings of sadness and gratitude I deliver you the final installment.
I have dealt with a multitude of haiku by other people. Today, I shall show you some of mine:

okosumaji/neya ni moguru mo/gekko ni

guided by the moonlight
I reach for my side of bed
without waking her up



A nocturnal animal, I often work into the small hours. Seven years after writing this haiku, I lost my wife, Diana, earlier this year to cancer. While she appreciated my work, at the same time she was my best critic.


shunsho ya/tsuma no shinigao/uruwashiki

early spring night
my wife's dying face
so elegant



Mozart's violin concerto in E, K261 was playing when she ascended to heaven. I felt as if I were carried up with her the whole way too, all but in body. We were one. We found a universe of sublime beauty. Glory, sublimity and beauty. Nothing negative associated with death was present. Though it may seem hard to believe, her death was beautiful.

neko mo inu mo/ichi o sadamete/hekiro kana

the cat and the dogs
settling in their places
in front of the hearth



Lolita, Bluebell and Phoebe. The three animals Diana loved so much all died before she did. Some of her ashes were scattered over their graves, which are now home to some small cherry trees. The trees were in full bloom in our garden this year, but she did not see them for the first time. This haiku was my first to be published in the Hototogisu magazine. It seemed to symbolize the idyllic life we led together in our old English farmhouse.


kai inu no/o o furu saki ya/mugi no aki

beyond the wagging tail
of our dog
spreads a golden corn field



Diana and I had countless walks in the countryside around our farmhouse. The nearest neighbor was and is several kilometers away so our only friends were rabbits, pheasants, wood pigeons, foxes and the like. This made our residence seem more secluded than that even of haiku poet Kobayashi Issa (1763-1827). The fields we used to pass were of different sizes, ranging from about 202,000 to 405,000 square meters, each having different crops every year such as wheat, beans and rape. The vistas we had seemed to form a gigantic canvas on which dramatic abstract paintings were created in each season.


shinjaga ya/tsuchi no nioi mo/tomo ni ku-u

new potatoes...
the smell of earth
I eat as well



I am not a farmer, but I used to grow more than 50 different vegetables while Diana was busy creating a flower garden of her own distinct design. I will never forget the time one dusk when I lifted out my first crop of potatoes. Round white things emerged in dozens out of the dark earth. My joy was absolute.


tosukana no/yami o fukamuru/hotaru kana

fireflies deepen
the darkness
of the Tuscan hills



We went on many trips together, with Italy being our fondest destination. In Japan, Lake Mashu in Hokkaido became Diana's favorite place, where according to her dying wishes some of her ashes are to be scattered on a fine day.



Majoruka no/kyuka saigo no/tabine kana

holiday in Majorca...
her last journey
in this world



She enjoyed a sense of adventure, new places and above all being alive. Within six months of the trip to Majorca, she would be embarking on what really was her final journey, unbeknown to everyone including herself.

However, this same period proved to be the happiest and most fulfilled part of her life and our marriage. At no other time were we closer to each other. Then she vanished, just like that.

miru mono no/naki kareno nite/ware wa miru

in a withered field
with nothing much to look at
I start to see



Her beautiful death in late winter opened my eyes to new things. In that most desolate of all seasons it jolted me and human love, joy, happiness and hope blossomed within me, making me a better person, at least temporarily. I also found it enlightening that these and other positive sentiments are not only found in happy times.

natsukusa ya/kino no yume o/kumo no amu

summer grass...
a lone spider weaves
yesterday's dream



Since Diana's death I have come to avoid killing insects or worms unnecessarily. With some spiders I have even made friends. Now, I am experiencing one of England's soggiest summers with floods, thunderstorms and almost "tropical" rain. The greatest discovery for me is that Diana meant everything to me. From this time on I can only dream about what has happened in the past.


taiko yori/mokushi kataranu/kyoseki kana

under the summer sky
giant stones silent
since eternity



This haiku refers to ancient megalithic monuments at Avery, England.

kiichigo ya/akikaze ni yure/tsumi-gatashi

blackberries
sway in the autumn wind
difficult to pick



It was customary for us to pick blackberries from the hedges around Leys Farm, where we lived.

Shirotae bloom...
whiter than the
flurry of snow



We chose this beautiful cherry tree for our garden after inspecting 400 cherry trees in London's Kew Gardens.

pati no/kyaku to fukiru/ko no ha kana

autumn leaves
rush inside
along with party guests



This haiku refers to one of the many dinner parties we enjoyed holding together.

spade splits the earth
into two worlds...
earthworm in between



This often happened when I was doing the vegetable gardening.

harukeku mo/tomo ni ayumishi/fuyu urara

such a long time
you and I together...
the sunshine of winter


Last December Diana and I celebrated our 30th wedding anniversary.



Takiguchi is chairman of the World Haiku Club, a worldwide haiku network (www.worldhaikuclub.org).
A Japanese artist, poet and essayist, Takiguchi has lived in England since 1971).
(Aug. 9, 2007)


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©　Susumu Takiguchi, Article from the Ginyu No. 5, 1999


Haiku As a World Phenomenon

"...After about twenty-five years of English language haiku do we know what haiku is?"(1)
It is refreshing to hear such a modest remark as this from such a doyen of haiku poetry as Cor van den Heuvel. The remark was made nearly fourteen years ago. Are we any wiser? The lack of general consensus on this question looked to him to be "a sign of its health and vitality".
Are haiku poems written today not only in English but also in all other languages in good health and full of vitality? Do we retain van den Heuvel's humility?

Some say that they are now tired of this "What is haiku?" question repeated countless times. Others still insist that this and other fundamental questions on haiku "have not become old questions" (2). In a similar vein, is the question "What is time?" boring as opposed to the question "What time is it?", which may be boring?

While not only Japan but also the rest of the world seem to be enjoying an unprecedented popularity and proliferation of haiku, there are some worrying signs as well. The history of haiku is a succession of prosperity followed by decline. So, the ups and downs of the haiku movement are nothing new.

What is different in today's haiku scene is that prosperity and deterioration are there simultaneously. It has been pointed out that symptoms of the deterioration include stagnation of existing haiku movements, lowering of the standards and quality of haiku, commercialisation of haiku, factional rivalries, self-aggrandizement and deterioration and corruption generally. They have been seen to be sapping the health and vitality of haiku and yet precious little seems to be done about it. How has this state of affairs come about and how can we possibly free ourselves from this situation?

"Fueki ryuko 不易と流行" (3) is an answer.
This is one of the essential principles of what I call Basho's dialectic poetics. It should be given much greater significance than was originally perceived. This is because it now applies to almost all aspects of modern Japan where the balance between fueki, or permanent values, and ryuko, or changes, is shaky. A similar situation is also seen elsewhere in the world.

The two words can be interpreted in more ways than one. Fueki, for instance, can represent unchanging tradition while ryuko can represent changing fashion. Since the two are contradictory there should be a kind of creative tension generated between them. This tension should keep haiku fresh, creative and interesting. If people cling to tradition and neglect newness (or atarashimi) inherent in fashion, then haiku could become stale, imitative and boring. If, on the other hand, people indulge in newness without tradition, haiku could become gimmicky, incomprehensible and nonsensical. Needless to say, fueki should be genuine fueki, and ryuko should be genuine ryuko. And here starts one of the most important arguments, "What makes fueki and ryuko genuine?"

Another answer would be "Kogo kizoku".
This is also a principle of Basho's dialectic poetics and means "obtaining high enlightenment but coming back to the populace". There has been a tendency to polarise these two essential factors so much that they have lost their vital link. Some people have become "elitists", armed with their own creed and are negligent of kizoku, or addressing plebeian needs. Others have gone the opposite way and vulgarised haiku by neglecting kogo. Again, we need both of these factors interacting and forming creative tension.

If we are blessed with kogo at all, then that is better than nothing. However, we have witnessed the deterioration of the quality of kogo. Some haiku debates are perceived to be nothing but poor and often empty rhetoric. Even worse, some others are taken to be merely a collection of dogmas, or misconceptions.

The third answer may be found in the teaching of Basho, "Don't follow ancient masters, seek what they tried to seek". We see people blindly following not only ancient masters but also modern masters without knowing what they tried to seek. What this means is that we are in need of going back to basics and deepening our thought and understanding of the fundamental issues still to be addressed. One way of doing so may be for us to do an honest and critical review and reassessment of the current haiku movements, including their well-established canon. Only then will we be in a position to discuss the fundamental issues of haiku and to find ways in which haiku will be allowed to develop further in good health and vitality.

Now that haiku has spread across the world, we might as well do such a review and reassessment on a worldwide scale. In this regard what is painfully lacking is the true communication between Japan and the rest of the world. This is regretable for both parties because Japan could gain some insight and inspiration from the way haiku is written overseas in order to break the stalemate which her own haiku world seems to be experiencing. Also the rest of the world could learn whatever it has not yet learnt from Japan and could correct whatever misconceptions it might have developed in the absence of the true understanding of Japanese haiku.

Outside Japan, communication among haiku people is much better by comparison but it is by no means adequate or perfect. More co-ordination and exchange is needed. Regionally, things are improving through such means as international conferences, mutual exchange of information and people and last but not least through use of the Internet. Ideally, efforts in this direction on a worldwide basis need to be made. World Haiku Festival 2000 which the present author is organising in Britain for the year 2000 is the world's first event of its kind.
If the "Prelude to HAIKU2000" which started in 1998 and the "Epilogue to World Haiku Festival 2000" planned for May 2001 are included, this project spans four long years and involves a great number of haiku events for the purpose of disseminating and developing haiku at the same time.

The most important characteristic of World Haiku Festival 2000 is that it looks upon haiku not as a product of one particular country, or of a group of countries but as a literary and cultural phenomenon of the whole world, a standpoint which has never been taken before. It does not mean, however, that each constituent country is not important. On the contrary, each haiku country is put in the world's perspective and studied more vigorously than before. World Haiku Festival 2000 is a worldwide network which transcends factionalism, nationalism, imperialism and any other undesirable rivalries and disputes as well as any hindrances to positive, constructive and friendly relationships among haijin of the world.

It is very exciting that similar movements, aimed at making haiku a world phenomenon, are beginning to emerge in different parts of the world. If this becomes a strong and concerted trend, half the battle is won. Those people who are spearheading this type of movement are hoping that haiku clubs and associations in different countries and, most importantly, each haijin everywhere in the world will join in this movement. However, they will only be able to do so if they are prepared to overcome their narrow-minded factionalism and personal self-aggrandizement and take a humble and friendly stance.

We need to draw a world map of haiku.
We also need to write a history of haiku from the world's perspective. In this way, we share our resources and drive and avoid wasteful overlapping. We may also be able to overcome the aforesaid damaging rivalries and narrow-minded isolationist attitude and a host of undesirable human foibles all of which are observed in the modern haiku scene. Many leading haiku poets in the world with whom I have made friends as I prepare for World Haiku Festival 2000 are seriously seeking the right way, or a likely way, in which haiku can develop in the future. I call them 'haiku thinkers' and they can make an enormous contribution to the advancement of world haiku if their efforts are co-ordinated. All too often it is pointed out that in such efforts, sadly, the Japanese are conspicuous by their absence.

We also need to compile a new classification of haiku which has reached a stage of such diversification that we constantly run the risk of talking cross purposes if we just use 'haiku' as a general term. At this stage, the classification need not be too elaborate or detailed as in the case of Masaoka Shiki's efforts. Avant-garde haiku poets cannot possibly be speaking the same language as fundamentalists of the traditional haiku school. In paintings, we accept the co-existence of the Old Masters, religious paintings, landscapes, still lifes, seascapes, figurative, abstract, surrealism, conceptual art, pop art, minimalist, Japanese paintings, African art, or whatever. There is no point in denying somebody else's haiku as being not haiku, when we have such varieties of haiku poems in over seventy different languages (4).

Ultimately, we are after truths. If St. Augustine said that poetry was devil's wine (5), it must be that poetry is a powerful wine. One reason why it is powerful is that "in vino veritas". A poet said that wine was bottled poetry (6). Then the essence of poetry must be truths, and universal truths at that. As Aristotle put it, ("while poetry is concerned with universal truths, history treats of particular facts." (7) When Basho talks about fuga no makoto, this is normally interpreted as poetic sincerity. However, makoto also means truths, or true words, or true things. In ancient times makoto referred to man's spiritual state where shin (truth), zen (goodness) and bi (beauty) were integrated. In terms of poets, makoto is that which springs from their magokoro (true heart, or soul). Haiku is certainly capable of (local, particular) truths. Sometimes it is capable of universal truths and that is when great haiku poems are born.

Poetic truths, then, must be a criterion against which inferior and dubious haiku poems can be weeded out. Haiku is part of the haiku poet's way of life. Haiku is partly what he or she is. If he or she is not truthful his or her haiku cannot be good poetry. In today's climate where haiku values are confused, it is important for us to go back to such stringent criterion as poetic truths.

This point has been eloquently described by our contemporary haijin Jim Kacian in a recently published book entitled KNOTS with a hole in the middle of it, through which one passes a string and tie the book by making a knot. It goes, This is what is indestructible in haiku, what has made it grow from one nation's cultural export to a world's form of choice to reveal the truth and beauty of the deep moments, the connected moments, of our lives." (8)

Though fuga no makoto must not be taken too narrowly, it is instructive that it relates to truths first and foremost and not to beauty. Basho was not a mere natural poet, a point which should be brought to the attention of some haiku poets of the traditional school of haiku, who emphasise natural beauty to the exclusion of other haiku values.

There are a great deal more things that Japan and the rest of the world can and must do to move on and find the way forward in the interest of the further development of world haiku. World Haiku Festival 2000 aims to provide some of the answers and also tries to encourage haijin from all corners of the world to join in the movement it has started. The readers of this pioneering haiku magazine are welcome to discuss these matters with.


Notes:

(1) Preface to the Second Edition, "The Haiku Anthology, Haiku and Senryu in English, Simon & Schuster, 1986, p 19.
(2) Lee Gurga, "The Midwest: Cradle of American Haiku" , 5 July 1999.
(3) Fueki ryuko is one of the key concepts of Basho's poetics.
(4) There is no "official" statistics. This figure is only according to an estimate.
(5) "Poetry is devil's wine", Cntra Academicos, St. Augustine (AD 354-430)
(6) Robert Louis Stevenson (1850-1894)
(7) Poetics, Aristotle (384-322BC)
(8) Jim Kacian, "Tapping the Common Well", Knots - The Anthology of Southeastern European Haiku Poetry, Tolmin, Slovenia, 1999

Susumu Takiguchi
is a haiku poet and critic, artist and essayist, with various other interests. A Japanese national, residing in the United Kingdom for nearly thirty years, his interest in haiku began with a study of Matsuo Basho while he was Lecturer in Japanese Language and Civilisation at Aston University in Birmingham, England. This interest continued to grow until now when he is engaged in the international haiku movement. The prime example of this is the World Haiku Festival 2000 organised by him in London and Oxford 25 - 30 August 2000. In 1998 he established the World Haiku Club which manages the Festival and its numerous events including world-wide haiku networks on the Internet.

He was born in 1944 in Japan and studied at Waseda University, Tokyo and the University of Oxford. He has had a wide-ranging career, including financial reporter with Nihon Keizai Shimbun (Nikkei); Editor-in-Chief, The Art Market Report; art critic and part-time lecturer at Oxford University; lecturer at Aston University in Birmingham; Executive Director of Strategic Planning and Research, Nomura Europe PLC. He is currently Director of Ami-Net Oxford International and occasional lecturer at Oxford Brookes University. He is Chairman of the World Haiku Club.

Publications include Kyoshi - A Haiku Master (Ami-Net International Press), Ushizu no Zaregoto (an anthology). He has also translated The Fake's Progress by Tom Keating, Geraldine Norman, Frank Norman (Shincho-sha), Naked Came I (the life of August Rodin) by David Weiss (Futami-Shobo), Towards The Tamarind Trees by Anthony Trew (Hayakawa-Shobo), Modesty Blaise by Peter O'Donnell.


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